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bywalker



Joined: 10 May 2008
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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 5:53 am    Post subject: fourthJob.com Reply with quote
My new affiliate website is up and active. I am not sure what I got myself into, but this is my first stab at it! Let me know what you all think!

http://www.fourthjob.com
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quest



Joined: 13 Aug 2006
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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 8:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
It's like watching American Idol and listening to a classic Karaokeized.

Adsense and RichJerk are your PROVEN money makers. RichJerk died about a year ago - I believe he was mistakenly shot by Elmer Fudd.

You're site looks okay.

Our Goal at fourthjob.com is a Horrific heading. Who would want 4 jobs?

Too many late night taco ads. Creativity is a tough thing to plagiarize.

Now for a little fun:

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Are you tired of home based business opportunities that do not deliver what they promise?


Hell YES!!!

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Below you will find reviews of the top 3 opportunities that actually work.


Thank God! I wouldn't want to invest my money in something that didn't work.

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You will also find advertisements for other programs that also work


Everything works.. that's awesome!

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The key to making money online is knowing how and where to start.


How and where to start. I wish I would have thought of that. Why didn't I think of that. Why why why. That's the key. I better keep reading to get to the answers to HOW and WHY.

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The following products guarantee your online success; all you have to do is read them and follow their expert advice!


You mean all I have to do is read them and the money will start pouring in? I bet you are already a millionaire cause you've already read them. Plus they are guaranteed. Wow. I'm excited (Looks into wallet for credit card).
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ALL of the links and banners on this website are designed to make you money as well.


For me really? That's awesome!!! But how are you going to make money if I make it all?

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I have personally reviewed all of them and they are all members of either: GeoTrust, Verisign, Hacker Safe, TRUSTe, BBB Online Reliability, Trust-Guard, SafeSurf or some other means of validation or SSL certificate to be able to make the cut on my website


Oh boy now I'm confused (puts wallet down for a moment). That's a lot of really impressive places. I should probably go read them all to see what it all means. Trust-Guard. Huh I haven't heard of that but it sure sounds official. Plus you reviewed them all. And you - oh boy I'm confused again. What's a SSL certificate. Can I buy one of those? Why am I here now?

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They are ALL proven and ALL tested. If you want to start making money right away then click on the banners or links that suit what you are looking for. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact our professional staff 24/7.


Well I do want to make money right away (Looks around for link or phone number to "Professional Staff"). I'm not sure what suits me though. Which one is right for me.

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Immediately below you will find reviews of the top 3 home based business opportunities (according to clickbank.com) that actually work!


Wow it's a good think I know what clickbank is and that they actually work. Otherwise what's the point?

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Check out our #1 Pick! TheRichJerk.com is rated the #1 Opportunity (according to clickbank.com) for making money online.


I just went there. It was easy I just typed in TheRichJerk.com into my browser. Thanks.

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Please don't get discouraged or overwhelmed with all of the options you see here.


Why would I be overwhelmed. Everything is presented in such a tight and orderly fashion.

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Well once again.

How does one make money selling other peoples stuff if they don't know how to use that stuff to make money for themselves?

You can't just throw up a ton of links to stuff and expect to make money.

I see absolutely nothing on your site that would convince anyone to purchase any of the Golden Opportunities.

It's just a page of stuff.

Focus on something.

I like to say this a lot.

Would you go to a Dentist that had never gone to Dental School?

PS: This is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. You should be able to learn from it. Rarely do I take the time to evaluate other peoples sites for free.

Read it and think about what you have done and you'll be that much closer to learning how to make money online.

Get all pissed off and offended and you'll join the ranks of the other 99% of people who are just wasting their time pretending.
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