First off, congratulations on getting a site up and running.
As for feedback, here's my initial reaction to looking at your site.
The color scheme is a bit rough on the eyes. It would be easier to read with a white background instead of brown. It looks like you may be trying a Feng Shui kind of color scheme with the red, but I still think even the red banner would pop better with a white background underneath all that text below the banner that you want visitors to read.
I wish there was an "About Me" section so that I could learn more about you and why I should follow your recommendations over those of any other stranger I meet online.
You have the free ebook I can opt-in to download but you don't tell me anything about the ebook or why I would want to download it. So, I would recommend writing a very focused paragraph about that ebook that would make me want to give you my info so I could read it.
Again, that's just my initial take on things. I think it's great that you're in action and asking for feedback. Keep going!
Good luck!
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